Could the heading name be changed to something like "Successful album and plugins" or something better? Also, the material in that section contains more than just the info on Super Street Fighter II Turbo HD Remix.
The heading Super Street Fighter II Turbo HD Remix ends up looking very bold as a heading and out of place. he thought the music was better than the art work? "praised the remixed music before UDON's high definition artwork." - does this mean he praised the music over UDON's artwork? i.e. "as a spin-off of his gaming and video game emulation related 3D webcomic, OverClocked" - his gaming and video game emulation related 3D webcomic - do you mean emulation-related or what? I don't quite understand. Pres N 18:51, 13 January 2009 (UTC) More comments 
Mattisse ( Talk) 18:34, 13 January 2009 (UTC) Alright, I beleive I addressed all of the above issues.
"where the majority of community interaction occurs" - the wikilink to interaction does not explain interaction specifically enough for your use here. "Lloyd and other staff also conduct interviews with prolific ReMixers, video game music composers and celebrities on video game music creation and fandom." - conduct interviews with fandom? Since fandom means fans collectively, how do they conduct interviews with fans collectively?. "The site also maintains a skills database of its community to encourage artist collaboration" - The site maintains a database of the skills of members of its coummunity to encourage.?. "tributing" - tribute is not a verb but a noun, so there is no such word as "tributing". What are "overly liberal arrangements"?. "Other violations include "stolen"." - why is stolen in quotes?. "165 works have been removed throughout the years." - not supposed to start a sentence with a number. "as a spin-off of his gaming and emulation related." what does emulation mean in this context?. Why is this bolded: DJ Pretzel's OverClocked ReMix? Also, is it an organization, a website, both, or what? Why is the name different from the article name?. Per MoS: Overlinking and underlinking, common words like website and webmaster should not be wikilinked. "free fan " - do you mean video game fan or video game music fan?. 
"through interpretation with new technology" - not sure what you mean by "interpretation" here."dedicated to the preservation and tribute of video game music" - a grammatical problem as "tribute" needs a "to" after it, as in "tribute to" - sentence needs to be reworded.Mattisse ( Talk) 18:34, 13 January 2009 (UTC) Comments My initial comments are below and I may add more. Below I will list my comments regarding issues in the article, some of which may seem nit picky. It is about a very interesting subject about which I know little.
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